FanOfFates

Thanks for the review! Now that I go back and look at it, I agree that the line "I can't tell apart the feel" does seem sorta weird, so I'll ...

Thanks for the review! As for the rhyme scheme, it's supposed to be a little all over the place to somewhat symbolize the topic of the poem. I tried to ...

Thank you for the great review! You made some great points, and I think I might do a few edits (with your tips in mind) when I have the time.