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Re: Ariana of Saindon
If you wanted to, there is so much you could do with this piece. The thoughts that flow through her head near the end leaves so many possibilities. If you ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: The Tome of the Constellations: Chapter 3
I like your story so far, especially the ongoing fued between Niyana and Rame. Like lordess said there are a few problems with typos but a quick spell check will ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Light and Darkness
Well, I've edited it and put in a bit about there being no wards up when Seth and Cal break into the school though it will be explained properly in ...
Feb 14, 2007 -
Re: Broken
I agree. I sort of ran out of ideas and flopped.
Feb 14, 2007 -
Re: Devil's Island
Great characters. But is it a prologue because i want to know how echleon came by the skull and how he's lived for so long.
Feb 13, 2007
