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Re: Deadly Beauty
Hey there! Snakes are lovely creatures. :3 One quick housekeeping thing. You probably want to fix the break here: "Just as I rounded the path a ways away from my ...
Jun 19, 2015 -
Re: Bloody Frosting (FTT Ark vs Holy)
Hello there! Just some housekeeping on the grammatical front first: If a form of "to say" follows a quote, the quote should end in a comma if it would have ...
Jun 16, 2015
