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Re: Childs play part two point five
FANTASTIC!!!!!!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: That is all I realy have to say!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Childs play part two point five
FANTASTIC!!!!!!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: That is all I realy have to say!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Child's play part 2
More Pin Elephants!!!!!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: I have become rather addictd to yor style. This story is still confusing at parts but it is amazing. Watch fo
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
I am surpirsed to be honest. I suppose I am bad at prediction on the behalf of people. This piece is fantastic; dark and thrilling with a laceing of confusion ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Call Me Falline
Hi. I'm Falline Avery, or at least that is what myreaders know me as. i am just lookingfor honest reviews so ya let me know. :elephant:
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Wood Shards & Infidelity To Self
*This was actually a speech that I had to write on an item that is important to me. What I wrote about ws a small piece of broken wood that ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Acting
This is amazing to me. it is short but it is true. I have felt like this for a long long time and everything you say in this poem is ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Trust.
I mean it i to the point but I agree that there needs to be a bit more imagery. Not a lot cause if I a correct you are going ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: When Souls Collide (Part 1 Chap. 1)
* Ths is my life story in novel form; ae been working on this piece sinceFreashmen year but I know it is still not even close to perfect.Well pretty much. ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Running
:elephant: Well it captured me. am a strong believer in love, that is why I write it. Your piece came to an end far too quickly for me. In my ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Sour Girl
Dude!!!!!! This is a fantastic piece. I was really captured by the mater-of-fact tone that your main character held. You speak the truth which I find a great human value. ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Keep Watching
:shock: Due to the awful fact that my Internet is stupid I will not be able to post the first chapter or do any reviews for about a week. Keep ...
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Shining Light In Dark places
Hello. my name is Kayla t. but my few readers know me as Falline Avery. The pieces that I post are pulled from true pain and experiences that I have ...
Aug 10, 2009
