Fall_Into_The_Sky

couples grammar errors still very well written

wow i get how the guy feels i love your work i don't have a good book to read so i've been reading forum stories i've read all u have ...

its rough but i like it i share your fear

short and sweet i love birds

Will you read this from me when I an dead ^should be am dead great poem

f in ninjaas lol love the last part

addicted to ur romance stories

as usual exceptional short story

omg i'm crying that was such a beautiful story but so sad..

wow you can really write i'll be looking forward to more of this

thanks guys count are treasures not our pockets The above means to pay more attention to the treasures in life not the money you have attained.

i rated awesome

i like how its formatted keep up the good work

Very well written. I'm guessing that your character is seeing the ghost of the supposed couple. Look forward to seeing more to this story.

nice Jake sounds like the class clown but in a way different.