Fall_Into_The_Sky

I knew it! I knew Adrian was in a cult. There had to be a reason why he would just dump her. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow that's really harsh.. If that happened to my child I would help her gret threw it not ignor her. This is very well deatailed and I commend you for ...

One word Beautiful. This story sent a shiverd own my spine , literally, when the car hit them. See you never know how much something really means to you untill ...

Already getting sucked into this story. I live for a good vampire or werewolf novel :) I like the part where Rath stands uop for his girl.

She looks like a bit of both Fox tail and ears Human body * I added a part that says how she looked.

There are two more chapters

Thanks for the critique! Feral - A feral is a cross between a human and an animal demon. Yes it's a bit odd lol. Tonya is a feral ( a ...

Thanks for the critique. This is somthing I put together for my friend Alex. ( an anime story).

Wow.. I really enjoyed this. I wonder what's wit Adrian?

I'd love to read the first few chapters also.

Nice twist to the story. I loved the part where he crushed the roses. And just when he is falling in love with her she kisses Tom. Ouch!

As usual no dislikes about the story. Just to keep at it and keep me posted. :)

Ahhh! She blew it Scot likes her and she's so oblivious to it...

Ick I have stuff like this 2 look forward 2 in vet tech school... Anyways interesting story.

ahh i love this story I knew it! I knew it was just some crappy jerk toying with her. I hate guys like that.. Anyways keep up the work..