FallWolf

Thanks for your review Lettersnumbersonly =) And thank you for noticing my slip up with Kat calling Cody Code accidentally. "Code" is actually Cody's nickname, and these two character have ...

Thanks jazzy52314 =) I hope that my future stories live up to what you say about this one =) Write on!

Thanks so much, for both your advice and cheer =D

Thanks so much HolographicLadybug! It's great to see that my story is doing what I meant for it to do; bring people into awareness about real life things that happen ...

Thanks so much =) I really loved this idea, as I want to bring awareness of the bad things that happen, but still give out some hope that the world ...

My mom says I write too much like a girl with male characters =P

After careful study of this piece, I have decided to keep it on only one more week, then take it off to re-write on a later date. Any reviews I ...

Thanks for your advice =). I was definitely disturbed myself while writing this piece, and have even considered taking it off YWS and re-writing it at some later date. It ...

Also, just a little add on, where is B1 getting his book? Or if BG (or GG depending on where in the play you are) is the one with the ...

This is purely a rough draft. I've had this idea ever since hearing about a school shootout, but didn't get around to writing it till now. Hope you enjoy =)

Thanks so much guys =) It's awesome to finally, after around year of searching, find a site that I can share my work on and practice my critique skills.

Okay, this is not a review because I don't feel that I am the right person to critique this since I don't read poems that often. However, I did want ...