FallWolf

Thank you, zeroZyra, for your review! I see you have caught on to my greatest weakness: making sentences too long. I will try my best to rectify this problem, especially ...

Thank you very much for your review, PrincessInk! You have quickly found the usual mistakes I make when editing a piece (tense changing is one of my peeves too, but ...

This is simply amazing as a first draft! You have already set up the important characters, introduced us into your world quite nicely (there's a couple kinks you could iron ...

Don't worry, I get you! This piece really was an experiment, I wanted to show how someone who might seem over the top annoying and happy can just be putting ...

Thanks for the grammar help CiaraLockhart =)

Thanks TahaT11n! I'll remember to tag u =)

Guys, I need help! This is the script for a soon-to-be-made animation done by Anti-Productions (as soon as the team has the animation up, I'll post a link) and this ...

Thank you Winchester19867 =)

Thank you very much TZH =)

Hey Shadow of Radiance =P Just thought I'd pop by for a short comment; I would really like to see this story expanded! Your writing style is perfect for this ...

Thanks, SereneSimpliciT (Maddie) for your review =) I am practicing for doing some writing contests (college money, gotta get it somewhere over the school season) so I'm very grateful for ...

Thanks for your insight Liaya! I'll get working on it right away =) The problem with me is that I write and post all my flash fiction in less than ...

oops, I guess my last reply was too long or something, because it doesn't seem to have posted. Anyways, I LOVE the ending to your story now! So much better ...

Thanks tigeraye =) This story was prompted by my habit of staring out the window whenever I'm trying to do school/art/stories and am stuck. Since I have read about a ...

OKey dokey =) Thanks again!