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Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams
What a beautiful tribute to Robin Williams! He was an amazing actor, and person. I loved him in Mrs. Doubtfire. His humor and emotion nearly brought me to tears, both ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Waiting
Good work! I like the simplicity of this piece. However it is interpreted, this expresses the pain felt when someone you care about hides their emotions from you. I'm sure ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Across the Horizon
I definitely love it! The wording is incredible and perfectly poetic! I really like the whole theme of the poem. The cloud effect is definitely creative and thought provoking, although ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Umbrella
I was pleasantly surprised by the hidden meaning I found in this story! I really like how you expressed something deeper using a simple object as a metaphor. The repetition ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Summer Closure
First if all, I love it! The words used are beautifully descriptive and helped me feel what the poem was saying. I've always liked free verse poetry. It is a ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Lighthouse
I love it! I like the whole “LIGHTHOUSE” theme. Now I really want to write an acrostic poem! Very image filled, and captivating. The past/train of a dress metaphor was ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: This Bitter Earth
Good job! You have a skilled writing style! Your attention to details really helped me see through the character's eyes. I really enjoyed the story. My favorite part, I think, ...
Jul 17, 2014
