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  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams

    What a beautiful tribute to Robin Williams! He was an amazing actor, and person. I loved him in Mrs. Doubtfire. His humor and emotion nearly brought me to tears, both ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Waiting

    Good work! I like the simplicity of this piece. However it is interpreted, this expresses the pain felt when someone you care about hides their emotions from you. I'm sure ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Across the Horizon

    I definitely love it! The wording is incredible and perfectly poetic! I really like the whole theme of the poem. The cloud effect is definitely creative and thought provoking, although ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Umbrella

    I was pleasantly surprised by the hidden meaning I found in this story! I really like how you expressed something deeper using a simple object as a metaphor. The repetition ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Summer Closure

    First if all, I love it! The words used are beautifully descriptive and helped me feel what the poem was saying. I've always liked free verse poetry. It is a ...

    Aug 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lighthouse

    I love it! I like the whole “LIGHTHOUSE” theme. Now I really want to write an acrostic poem! Very image filled, and captivating. The past/train of a dress metaphor was ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: This Bitter Earth

    Good job! You have a skilled writing style! Your attention to details really helped me see through the character's eyes. I really enjoyed the story. My favorite part, I think, ...

    Jul 17, 2014


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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