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Re: Gunshot Wound (1800s)
I am doing a story and a character in it gets shot, how would the wound be dressed? And not by a doctor. The year my story takes place in ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows
How beautiful. It flows like poetry. I enjoyed it very much, and honestly I can't find anything that you can fix, how can you fix something thats already beautiful? I'm ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: You're Not At the Beach Anymore Barbie! -Chapter1
how can I delete my post...please help....:( I rally don't know how this happened, but my cousin got on here and posted and I'd really like this to be deleted.
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: hey :)
Hi, Sofi, I'm FaithWorks, *shakes hand*, but you can just call me Faith. What genre of writing do you do? I write fiction, mainly historical, but it just depends. Fantasy, ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Hi, I'm new
Hi Jay! I'm FaithWorks, but you can just call me Faith. Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy it here. Blessings, Faith
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Fencing terms
Hi, I did a quick Google search and found these websites that may help: Hope this works for you:) Blessings, Faith
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Hi!:)
love writing fiction, I'm not to good at poetry. My favorite kind of fiction is historical, but it just depends on the kind of story idea I get. All my ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: "Guardians" Prologue
I enjoyed reading this very much, jules4848:) Good flow, a little more description would be nice, but with or without, it is a very good start and I for one ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: I Would Like to Dream
It reads like a poem and story all at the same time. Its truly beautiful. I'm not sure, and this might just be me, (so don't feel obligated to change ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: The lost soldier 2
Hello, I enjoyed both parts of your story, "The Lost Soldier". But I do agree with Sam, they need more description. Don't tell, show. Describe Alyssa's surroundings, the smells, textures, ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: New 2 This
Hello!:) I'm a new member as well, and so still getting the hang of things. Hope you enjoy it here. Blessings, Faith
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Ello ^.^
Hi!:) Welcome to the site. I'm new here as well and still getting the hang of things, (just joined yesterday), so I don't think I'll be of much help, but ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Hi!:)
Hi all:) Thank you so much for the welcome. I got my avie from the site's own gallery, actually. So adorable!:) I love writing fiction, I'm not to good at ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Hi!:)
Hi all!:) I'm FaithWorks, you can call me Faith if you want. I love writing, reading, and most of all Jesus Christ, my Savior, my Love. Blessings, Faith
Jul 6, 2008
