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Re: A Broken Dream
Hey, Fade here! First, I would like to say I love this poem. It is deep, it flows nicely, and it doesn't repeat at all. One thing I would say, ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Name (Sorry)
Hey, Fade here! Caleb new my favorite song was The Saltwater Room! Caleb new I would do anything to get Bradley to notice me! Here the 'new' should be 'knew' ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Children of God, Prologue
Hey, Fade here! First, I thought it was really good, and I will be interested in reading more. But, you need quotation marks. She asked him Are you a religious ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Death
Hey, Fade here! First of all, I really like the idea behind your poem, but I would suggest breaking it up a bit more. Death is that moment when you ...
May 18, 2010