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Re: The Hero's Violet
I actually liked it. I really liked it. The idea was great, the use of vocabulary was amazing, and I found almost no errors with the rhythm. I thought it ...
Jun 7, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Fried Rice #3
This is an okay start. Nothing really stood out that bugged me (except for some grammar mistakes). I like it because you really got to know the characters. The beginning ...
May 23, 2007 -
Re: MARY - MAY OFFEND (Over 13 for language)
This is a sad attempt at making fun of Christianity. If taking potshots at the validity of Mary being a virgin makes you swell with some sort of gross pride ...
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Black and White Movies
I have three words for this. W. O. W. This poem blew me away--the message is clear, yet so dark. I really enjoyed the use of repetition. You should keep ...
May 19, 2007 -
Re: Fire's Eclipse
I don't know what to say--it was okay. It didn't rivet me from the beginning and I was a little confused in the beginning. Nice use of vocabulary, though, but ...
May 18, 2007