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Re: Fire's Eclipse
I don't know what to say--it was okay. It didn't rivet me from the beginning and I was a little confused in the beginning. Nice use of vocabulary, though, but ...
May 18, 2007 -
Re: "Cat"
Sorry about my typo--I corrected it and put it in bold. Thank you all SO much for your corrections on my grammar (I did a really poor job for a ...
May 18, 2007 -
Re: A Dark Eyed Girl
I rather liked it, although I agree that it was a tad anti-climactic. Really nice use of extravagent vocabulary--it was really good! :D
May 18, 2007 -
Re: "Cat"
Inspired by Robert Frost's "The Pasture". I wrote it because I have a deathly fear of cats. Slinking across the floor on padded feet, He poisonously leers As a fearful ...
May 18, 2007 -
Re: "Magic of Hollywood"
Thank you all for your responses--I'll be sure to include them in my next poem or story. :D
May 18, 2007 -
Re: "Magic of Hollywood"
This is a poem I wrote for Language Arts class, inspired by William Carlos Williams' "The Red Wheelbarrow." Each stanza describes a different significant film: Mickey Mouse, The Wizard of ...
May 18, 2007
