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Re: Old Story
Hello there. This was an interesting story. Interesting concept. I'm not sure if I liked it though. There are a few nitpicky things that I feel like I must address. ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Karen and Allen (Part One)
Hello there. First off I wanted to tell you that I did really like this piece. I'm a sucker for plot twists and mental thrillers and all that jazz and ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: In Eachothers Arms
Hi there. I agree with Kit that this was a very cute story, but it was extremely short and I found myself asking 'that's it?' when I finished. If this ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hi Reina, I'm Jade and your story caught my eye. I did like this piece. The thing I enjoyed most was the style of it. You wrote this in a ...
Sep 4, 2010
