ExposedSoul

For a tomboy I would suggest a unisex name like Sam or Taylor.

BEWARE OF EXCESS EXCLAMATION AND THE CAPS LOCK KEY, AFTER A WHILE IT LOSES IT'S FLARE!!!!!! -Sarah, A small town no one has heard of

First let me say that I am sorry this ever took place. Second the writing is amazing. The pace, spelling, and grammer were all great but I think what I ...

I try to yell but I can find no air I make a feeble attempt at surfacing But my legs feel like cinderblocks Weighing me down My arms thrash chaotically ...

Paper usually, our computer is in the hallway and I'm paranoid about my parents walking by and reading my writing.

This is a very well written speech and I have only two suggestions: 1. I know not everyone will listen to me and bullying will never end, but if we ...

A couple things: 1. What happened to the Girl Scout? You put her in the script but never took her out. 2. Where did the Twilight haters come from? Was ...

Wow. This is great! I feel as though I have just opened an instruction manual on awkwardness instead of reading a last minute homework assignment. (I also found your examples ...

This is great because there is not a single person on the planet that can't relate to this. We have all either gone through it or are going through the ...

When people look at pictures they often focus on the image itself and not the camera. In these pictures you have to focus on a camera. They also make you ...

Okay.... Where is the conflict? It sounds as if your just exploring a characters thoughts, not writing a story. Please add some conflict.

Wow. I loved the anger. It made the story so realistic I felt as if I was there listening to the horrible drumming. And the purple shirt mystery... awesome. You've ...

Because fiction beats reality any day.