ExOmelas

I had forgotten but then I read you saying this below the other review and I was like 'Oh - oh - I have to like!' I think I shall ...

thanks :)

I dunno. Hold on, I'll PM a mod

Does it appear twice on your computer or is it just mine showing it like that?

And could you please address the fact that your review is present twice?

I'll explain to you just now then edit it when I'm on my laptop. An ID tag is like the file reference number on a computer and is fictional. It's ...

Okay cool :)

Your review has come up twice

What was happening was Chip didn't hear the ID tag but the penguin holding McCaw did. He tells it to Chip, then says it into Chip's comms hub. Margo replies ...

You're very welcome :)

You're welcome :)

thaaaank you

Right, I finished reading the review and thank you so much for your comments. I was very glad to realise that most of your points are things I can work ...

ok, I will soon :)

So I'm not going to finish reading this just now because it's a camp nano novel but Lorna is supposed to be very submissive. I wanted to make it very ...