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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Vyheria - Prologue

    You%u2019re welcome :)

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: More Than Dead - Chapter 1

    I'm glad ^.^

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: In the Hands of Six 1.1

    Sure thing, I'll try and get a chance tomorrow ^.^

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]

    Alrighty, fair enough on both counts. Feel free to let me know when the next chapter is up ^.^

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1

    I think I probably am choosing by this point, for the sake of pacing. Will decide for definite when rewrites roll around though :)

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1

    Thanks Mess, that%u2019s really helpful ^.^

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1

    @Messenger @Thundahguy Thanks for your reviews! You both mention ages not seem realistic. I did mean Daena to be oldest, and if I described Janet as oldest then it would ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 11 - What about Kyle Murphy?

    Haha awesome ^.^

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 1.1

    you're welcome ^.^

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Slate and Earth Chapter 1

    oh and of course, let me know when the next chapter is up ^.^

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Prologue

    Haha, fair xD

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1

    Okay, I'll get another opinion on the cart bit (because someone else who didn't review said they thought it was a fine) but I am very willing to believe people ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1

    Thanks for the review, Pan! A lot of those are things I was worried might come up, so I'll try and work on them for the next chapter. I could ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 1

    Haha no worries! Maybe just every time I point out something to which I know the answer will be "LMS" I'll just comment "LMS" instead of giving the exact criticism ...

    Jun 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Conics Unfortunately: 73

    Also I'm going to go find the thing with the USB stick before I review the last chapter, so there'll be a bit of a delay there.

    Jun 22, 2018


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