ExOmelas

Like, I don't get why it being the "damsel-in-distress" tactic makes it any less clever? If it isn't clever and it's actually really obvious, then why would Michael fall for ...

Thanks for all this, Raye. I really do want to use as helpful terms as I can so if I keep reviewing this I'll definitely read some of these resources ...

Haha, I will do! xD

oooooooookay. *sighs with relief*

wait wasn't Malcolm like Carris's age? I thought he was like a kid

Oh also, any time I said "you have to" or "you should", put a "i think that" before whatever I said, because I had a really long argument about subjectivity ...

yaaaay go infodumps! I have a whole chapter of one lined up for some readers at some point and I cannot wait to dump it right on their heads :P

I AM VERY HAPPY RIGHT NOW! Ahem. Robots: nooo, it's a biological technology thing. Please tell me you weren't still thinking that by the end? I also don't have a ...

Ohhh okay, that would totally have been enough!

ah cool, fair enough ^.^

well i guess you'll be glad to know that because you saved this chapter from the green room i've just put the next one up :P (no rush, but it's ...

oh also thanks for the review! :D

To be clear, if I tell you right now that you will learn gradually how the animals gained the ability to talk and how they got to where they are ...

Thanks for the reviews Mess! I'll keep this all in mind in the next chapters because I'm actually kinda free-flowing on this so I'm putting advice into practice as fast ...

Oh thank god i was so worried the thing with Gordon not being a hero was going to sound contrived. i was expecting "wait, so he saved the life of ...