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holymoly that was a long paragraph. idk how I let that slip through the net O.O Thanks for the review haha :D

Excellent, sounds like you have a handle on things :) Haha thanks!

ah okay cool :) Haha yeah strange xD

Shadyshadyshady okay ima reply to both the second two reviews here. The locks: i have literally no idea what i was doing there. I think it was to make sure ...

Ahhhh you're the best

ahahahaha nice xD

ahahaha okay yeah i call it a bouncy castle xD that makes that scene so much funnier :D

awesome!

Oh oops, i guess i was reading too fast xD I do think it's a bit weird to switch like that though... How about she's basically unconscious but just has ...

Ah okay that makes sense. Devlin just being physically stronger. I could maybe have caught that if I was more awake. I'd wait til your next review to see whether ...

haha fair enough xD

Haha fair enough xD I'm glad I'm helping :D

Ahahaha I appreciate your effort xD

Ahhhh okay! I might actually go back and read the other chapters because I did enjoy this :)

Ohhh yeah I remember that now. Apologies xD