ExOmelas

p.s. this was maybe a bit long for many people to review. I'm on a green room quest, but most people are more selective and choose based on how quickly ...

Oh wow I literally just came from responding to your other review haha! I think you kind of sum up why I don't keep the dragon a mystery. Like, take ...

Thanks for the review Mage! I'm so glad you liked my description - I'm constantly working on balancing having too much and too little xD Happy review day! :D

Thanks for the review! Will talk to you in the pad

said this in a pad but just in case you're away for a while: yeah i think i have more of a handle on eric's mannerisms so it's easier to ...

Thanks for the review Pan! I'm glad you didn't see the dust-form-thing coming (will try and figure out another way to describe it). I was *almost* going to do something ...

thanks Pan! hmm... I'll have a think about the flashbacks. This was originally going to be a prologue, with the flashbacks framing the setup of the story, but it all ...

sweet okay, i'll tag you from now on! for now next chapter is already over here I'd still like to go mostly as Biscuits. I guess kind of as if ...

ahhh okey cool, no worries. clarification is easy enough to do :)

yay, thanks for the review :D now get tae posting! when you say the plot thickens a little, just to check, is that a suggestion that there should be more ...

hmm yeah that description balance is something that bugs me. like, you want to give people an idea of what they're looking at, but why would anyone's internal monologue (even ...

so actually given the flashback it's the late 1920s

Oh oops... hopefully that becomes apparent but I've just realised my only reference to that was the Messerschmitts, which were german planes in ww2 but idk if they're confined to ...

Eric speaking formal: the idea is that he's the kind of child who likes to do things properly, doesn't like getting in trouble, getting mud on his shoes, that kind ...

Thanks for the review Eagle! :D