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the telepathic communication is introduced in 2(2) when Josie comes down to the shed and convinces Dragon to go back in the shed. the idea is that she learnt it ...

yeah it's mostly because people prefer to read shorter chapters. it leads to some bloody ridiculous chapter splits sometimes but it's better than having something 2500 words sitting around not ...

so, the clue you're meant to get is the stuff about the Messerschmitts in the first paragraph. it's the end of the second world war now, whereas the references to ...

this part of the story is set in 1929. the flashforward-y bits are set during the second world war. after this chapter the whole thing is set in 1946 a ...

thanks again for the review Eagle!! :D

thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the review Ink! That's definitely a fair critique yeah. I'll see what I can do about that. Would you like a second review swap btw? I know the ...

ooooh intrigue hints dropped even outside of the story - wonderful! You're welcome! I forgot how easy the chapters were to fly through :D

That's a good point about describing the main character. There's a decent amount about him in previous chapters but the next part of this chapter also has a description of ...

hey Eagle! Thanks so much for the review :D I'll keep the other senses in mind

Thanks for the review Eagle! :D There is quite a bit of the story left to go actually. This chapter brings it to about 23,000 words or so on the ...

fair enough. i'm glad it was useful ^.^

ohhhh i see... that's a very interesting concept you're welcome :D

you're welcome :D