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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Arda's Flag Ch. 1: Where We Begin

    Hello, not much to say but just a few little pieces grammar stuff that I guess you have not noticed. "speak of their culture, speak of their religion." should be ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Santa Claus is on his way !!

    IT'S CHRIIIIIIISTMAAAASSSSSSSS. Honestly, I'm listening to Kerrang! radio just now and the DJ's are unbelievably grouchy. I'm like, would you please just cheer up?! So thank you, thank you for ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Remembering Juliet

    First I would actually like to say thank you because I didn't understand the lyrics of the song at all. I like how you put lyrics from the song into ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted

    I really like how the speech is exactly the same fron each poibt of view but there isn't too much of it so it doesn't get in the way of ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Chapter 1 - Fear

    This felt very emotive because the character admitted to her fears to the reader almost immediately which I guess shows desperation. Also, I really like the idea of thinking you're ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Fourth World: Chapter Two

    Just a quick thing because the grammar's already been pointed out and I may be completely wrong because I may have just missed it but ... What does Ember look ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Fourth World: Chapter One

    Hello, I'm similarly new to the site so I'm not sure if I've done this right. I really loved the premise and I think the relationship between Ember and Skylar ...

    Dec 20, 2013


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