ExOmelas

Hey Shady! I'm finally getting around to getting back into the swing of reviewing :) Nit-picks and nice moments: A sharp pain ran through her ribs, nearly making her yelp. ...

Okay, going to do this one then go back to trying to break 50k. I think I'll be able to review on Saturday so I'm not in a rush to ...

Alrighty, consider this the aforementioned insurance for tomorrow. Her voice was ice. No doubt said consequences would be unpleasant, to say the least. Glad she’s on our side, Edna thought. ...

Hey, last one of the day before I head out to see some friends. Damn, almost made it to the end without a nit-pick: The wizard drummed his fingers on ...

Round two! “She’s the Chosen One,” Edna said. Beside her, Benjamin relaxed fractionally. “Is that a good enough reason for you?” Kiernan smiled and leaned back in his chair. “Yes, ...

Alrighty, studying done for the day, time to try and review three chapters of this! Goodness me, he was fat. That seems like it's Edna talking but then "he was" ...

Hey Saen, welcome to a 1am review because I want to keep up with Team Tortoise! Nit-picks and nice moments: I really like sentences like the following: Lira's room was ...

Hey Pan, I have a sneaking suspicion I might end up out this evening, so I figured I'd get my Team Tortoise review in now :) Nit-picks and nice moments: ...

Hey Sae, glad you made it in time for LMS! Nit-picks: He was watching her with a well-deserved wariness Not really sure what you mean by "well-deserved" here. Lira's eagerness ...

Hey Shan, glad you made it in time for LMS! Nit-picks: He bid ed his goodbyes to the man pressed her two hands onto the desk and harshly asked Keep ...

Hey Shady, I caught up with Revmo to the point where I didn't think I was going to need to review today and could just write Tayburn Zoo buuuut then ...

Okaaaay never mind, I might be risking burnout here but I wanna review more! “Don’t,” she repeated, but she didn’t throw his arm off. Hrm... I wonder why she's alright ...

Hey again, I think this will be my last one for the moment but I might do some more tonight. Nit-picks: Kiernan’s eyes flickered in her direction, but maybe Edna ...

Hey again, possibly going to do slightly more than I thought. I didn't realise the colour changes had to have the target reached within a time-frame, so I'm going to ...

Hey Blue, finally caught up with my LMS reviews, so I'm here to give you two or three reviews today :) Nit-picks and nice moments: “Why don’t I help you ...