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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 32

    Hey, I was walking to class and realised I was going to get there early so now attempting to review on my phone to slow me down :P Nit-picks and ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 11

    I'm too hungry to sleep so while I demolish some crisps I figured I might as well pop in for a new review :) Nit-picks and nice moments: There were ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: From State to State: 2.1

    Right, this review might be done half today and half tomorrow, so apologies for any discord between the two. Nit-picks and nice moments: point where I w o ke up ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 10

    Alright, last one tonight! Nit-picks and nice moments: Dread sunk to the bottom of Grey’s stomach. room He couldn’t tell her that he’d followed her home one night random "room" ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 9

    Two more tonight I think. Nit-picks and nice moments: I was going to say I was confused by the paper roses but it's becoming clearer that they literally become newspapers. ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 8

    *Bounces from cannibalism essay to here* :P Nit-picks and nice moments: “but she isn’t too sad about it. She must have killed her husband to be with her lover. But ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 7

    Hey, sorry I've been away for a bit. A bunch of novels I'm caught up with released chapters all at the same time. Nit-picks and nice moments: Nikki snorted then ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 31

    Hey, here on behalf of the After Watch to try and keep the Green Room clear ^.^ Nit-picks and nice moments: I lost interest in the rebels and could spare ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: From State to State: 1.2

    Quick thing: I'm on the second paragraph and think I now understand something I was confused about in the last chapter. When she said that this was the party where ...

    Sep 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 14

    Alright, here we go. Nit-picks and nice moments: Asha did not awake quickly. She drifted in and out of consciousness as blurry shapes and colors danced before her eyes. When ...

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Que Sera Sera Chapter 13

    Heyo, you're right it has been a while! Nit-picks: Vixen knocked on Jack’s door. He opened it and entered slowly to see the large cheetah sitting on his bed, already ...

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: From State to State: 1.1

    Heyo, I guess you know why I'm here (go team revmo!) :P Nit-picks and nice moments: Plenty of times they had to remove people from office because they went off ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 6

    This seems like a fun way to do my 400th review ^.^ Nit-picks and nice moments: She had given hi m a bowl of water “Question: the first,” Grey began ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of things - 4 & 5

    The best thing about LMS novels is that they're like the perfect length for reviewing xD Nit-picks and nice moments: She slowly lowered her hand, but as it passed in ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 3

    Just keep reviewing, just keep reviewing... Nit-picks and nice moments: One had paint splattered all over it with no seeming design, and one was just red. Giggled at that. “It’s ...

    Sep 12, 2017


Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
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