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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 22

    I was intending to review to procrastinate from reading for uni and discovered I had half of this one already auto-saved! Nit-picks and nice moments: Her most striking feature was ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 15

    Hey, sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I've had a very sleepy day. Nit-picks and nice moments: Asha didn’t want to wait, so she lied to Yuni. “Yes, Yuni. ...

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: From State to State: 3.1

    Ahhhh slight After Watch panic. Nit-picks and nice moments: My quite fabulous choice was to bring Bilbo and Gandalf to this world, much to the chagrin of the Mirkwood elves ...

    Sep 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 21

    I wonder if I might finish revmo today... Nit-picks and nice moments: it would have been a stain on their reputation for their son to be seen cavorting with the ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 20

    Ayyyyy turns out chapter 19 was the one I'd read before. Nit-picks and nice moments: Her voice caught on the last wor d No, Ivy , you cry as much ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 18

    Hey again, Nit-picks and nice moments: Nikki and Ivy nodded and walked down to his office I'm not sure "down" is exactly the right word. I might just not be ...

    Sep 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 17

    Ohhh I'm halfway the-ere... Nit-picks and nice moments: It’s t he magic black market. Oh man you got so close to zero nit-picks! Overall: I return to the fact that ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 16

    Okay, one more review then I go to bed. Seriously, I mean it. *forces self to go to sleep* Nit-picks and nice moments: the pretentious pricks This bit doesn't seem ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 15

    Well, my flatmate's out at a thing and it seems there's not a lot to do around here xD Nit-picks and nice moments: The dark mountain is rumbling, my boy. ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Que Sera Sera Chapter 14

    Here I am! Nit-picks: Then get going you two.” You forgot the opening speech marks. Dragon and Fox arrived in a hilly area, hiding as far away from the prison-like ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 14

    I guess there's worth things to be addicted to than reviewing... Nit-picks and nice moments: But this on e had truly captivated him. She looked at ivy and a sly ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: From State to State: 2.2

    A-ha! I am so sad that I have noticed this even before it was brought to my attention! Nit-picks and nice moments: I laughed when seeing Jimmy and Katherine I ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 13

    You'd think I'd have less time to review with uni starting back, but it turns out you do nothing in the first week even in third year. Nit-picks: He too ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 12

    If I finish this review today I will be ahead of revmo for I think the first time the entire month *happy dance* Nit-picks and nice moments: Even without the ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Literature, Other Re: Kazuo's Pickled Fingers (pt1)

    Hey, figured I might as well stop by to return the favour. Also if I do 6 more Green Room reviews this month I get a make-believe raven... long story. ...

    Sep 20, 2017


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind