ExOmelas

Hiya, let's do this! Nit-picks: And you should know that many of those sacred souls, kept in those god awful little pots, were war criminals, whose life ended in the ...

A-ha! Hello, Green Room chapter! Nit-picks: He let out a hoarse, unholy yelp as Ellipse hauled him over one shoulder like Saint Nicholas would his gigantic bag of presents and ...

Hi again, this may well be my last review of this review day, so I hope it is helpful to you :) I like that the speaker's language is beginning ...

dorf. That's a funny word. I may be running out of interesting opening sentences in the last fifteen minutes of review day... Without any way for me to tell how ...

Okay, right, I'm doing this. I only need 100 points to get first on the review day board, so there's no need to hang out in the green room. Prepare ...

Hey there, I just finished reading a novel I've been binge-reviewing today, so here goes into something different. Something very different... This is such an interesting concept! I've been reading ...

Did you seriously write this on Christmas? That is dedication! Nit-picks: Well, this first one isn't a nit-pick, so I guess we're going back to when I used to include ...

Yaaaay another green room chapter. I like that for every review I do on your novel that's one review against your review team, ah the irony xD Nit-picks: “Ellipse!” Focci ...

A-ha! By the end of this review I'll hopefully have passed you on the review day leaderboard! Bwahahaha. Nit-picks: Ellipse froze; the feeling of the night tubai’s ceramic exoskeleton gripping ...

Holy crap have I managed to catch up to the ones in the Green Room? Perfect for review day! Nit-picks: Focci hummed an augmented triad. “Go on then.” Not really ...

Woah, you have a lot of reviews on this chapter! Let's see if I can find something to say that hasn't been covered already... Nit-picks: Tejal avoided Ellipse like she ...

After a brief interlude, I return! Nit-picks: “I have a life,” Ellipse spat, “and as certain as I am that I could turn this into a kidnapping case, I would ...

Oooh a Focci chapter! Before even nit-picks - I have said it before, and I will say it again. Any chance you could indicate this is a Focci chapter at ...

I think I've run out of opening lines... Uh, hi! Nit-picks (again, congrats on only one!) : “I am sick of hearing you practice the alphabet,” he grumbled, shoving her ...

Heyyyy again, Nit-picks: Sometimes Ellipse forgot that Focci was some kind of mastermind programmer. Really? The fact that Focci is clever with computers seems to be something that comes up ...