ExOmelas

Hey, I know I said I wouldn't bother doing this but a) you said it would be useful for rewriting b) my god the tennis is boring today and c) ...

Hey Thunda, sorry for not following through on saying I'd review the rest of the chapters of Merry Band of Monsters. I do plan on going back to it, but ...

A-ha! I founds it! Nit-picks: Literally just this one Dante looked agonised. Maybe just a little bit of facial expression or body language here or something? Overall: Okay this may ...

I'm starting to get a little hungry but not giving up on my mission yet! Nit-picks: husband's - sensible, if not overly small for their imminently-growing-family - starter home I ...

Heyyy, *continues to have hyper review-energy* Nit-picks and nice moments: His body was found in the kitchen by a maid as Fredrick Damon's party continues to roar outside. Tense switch. ...

Hey Omni, I'm so excited about LMS that I've decided to review every chapter I can get my hands on xD Nit-picks: Master of the Mystic Arts Wong never did ...

Hi there, I saw that all the other chapters of this were in the Green Room so figured I'd do my best to get them all out, and that means ...

Just so you know by the way, you don't have to reply to these. I'm just trying to find a way that is somewhat productive to fill my time xD ...

Hey, I'm super bored and need something to do. I really liked the first chapter of this, so I guess I'm back. However, I realise that there's very little point ...

Hiya, I finished Conics Unfortunately so there's kind of a void left in my heart. I asked around for some novels and Blue recommended this one! Nit-picks: 1. Assorted typos ...

Okay, I decided just to review it since I remembered you were out of town and I don't think I could wait that long xD Nit-picks: I wiggled and felt ...

Hey, a bunch of stuff happened this week including a trip to London - but I am here now and ready to get up-to-date on this story! Nit-picks: It made ...

Almost there... Nice moments (because at this point I'll be surprised if there's a nit-pick): Her butt hurt a little, because of course wooden seats were comfortable to sit in ...

Alrighty, Take Two. No nit-picks this time. I really like the idea of this chapter as we approach the end. I think it's important that we look back at what ...

Hey, I think today might be the day I finally reach the end of this story. Here we go... Only one nit-pick, which is that this sentence took me a ...