ExOmelas

Hey, on lunch break from studying so thought I'd pop by for another review. Nit-picks and nice moments: responded to the one who had decided to describe the weather in ...

Hey, I saw you say something about needing reviews for your latest chapter the other day, so I thought I'd try and catch up :) Nit-picks (let me know if ...

Hey fraey, just catching up on my LMS reviews for this week :) That picture did not represent what a major critical event would appear like. "major critical event" sounds ...

Hiya, going to start doing the rounds of LMS reviews :) Isadora folded her arms. “Rascal.” This seems like a slightly odd word for someone I'm assuming is young? Nothing ...

Hey fraey, thought I'd return the favour of all those reviews you've been giving me recently

Hey Tuck! I had this idea at the start of review day that I'd try and review all chapter 1s of LMS's that had been posted. I don't think this ...

Hey Vent, thought I'd relive the one time I'd ever reviewed every single chapter of a completed novel on this site (your third round LMS!). No pressure :P Nit-picks (lemme ...

Hey melli, thought I'd return the favour and leave you a review. I think I'm just going to do this one nit-pick since it's a first draft: Jax had been ...

Hey, I'm almost caught up! She sent Jess a page asking him to call her back then went upstairs. I've been wondering, is this set in the same time period ...

Hiya. Politics is bad and I am hiding over here. I think the thing with Rory maaaay have ended too quickly, but I like the idea of Luke getting caught ...

Holy moly so short! One review coming up shortly! Well, since it's a good bit shorter I have less to say xD Firstly I want to mention that I don't ...

Ooookay one more big long chunk before the split chapters. Although I must say this is the fastest I've ever read chapters this long, so that's cool! Had Luke continued ...

I just want you to know, I'm going into this expecting Jess to get a D on that paper he worked so hard on. *takes deep breath* I am ready. ...

Fun fact, I started this review about 4 hours before finishing it because I had to go to a flat viewing. Let's hope it doesn't disturb the flow! This was ...

I can't decide if Jess's rejecting her before she has the chance to reject him is a bit expositional. I'm unsure how you'd hint at that but it does feel ...