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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.2

    Hey again, still no sign of burnout, which is nice :) Relieved, Edna turned to the young people and bopped Benjamin over the head with her handbag—no easy feat with ...

    Aug 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 5

    Hey, just to be clear, this is your entries for both weeks 5 and 6, right? Nit-picks: finding the bottom of what must have be en a creek or river ...

    Aug 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.1

    I'm utterly torturing my characters and it's making me feel like such a bad person so ima come over here and watch you destroy yours :P “What is it?” Clem ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.2

    Hey again! Nit-picks: But it’d be nice to have both her real hips and knees. How would being a witch have got her this? “It’s up to you of course,” ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 11.1

    I'm a bit hungry so the thought of scrolling up and down feels very unfun. So, no nit-picks today! There was probably only one or two anyway, but we've been ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Eos, Chapter 3.2: The Past and the Present

    Heyo, sorry I didn't get to this last week, got a bit confused with how your publishing is on a different schedule from your LMS posting. Nit-picks (probs won't do ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Vyheria - Chapter 5

    Hey friend, I'm sure this won't be as bad as you think, but I promise to be kind

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10

    Well, finished my writing, so I guess here we go again! [The first paragraph] Aesthetically too big. Probably could be split at some points. Probably legitimate but if you can ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.2

    Well I tried to write but it was that angsty scene I mentioned and then Lizz left hatt in charge of the music and it was just never gonna work ...

    Aug 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 9.1

    Hi again! Maybe I should actually do some writing at some point but *shrug* I'm here for now. The handle was hot. Well that seems like an understatement :P choked ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 8.2

    I made it! All my other reviews are done so I just get to set up camp here for the rest of the night! Her laughter rang through the church ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Fists of Fate - Chapter 4 (All Arcs)

    Hey, finally got here! Nit-picks: It was ineffective, as Boulder instantly reformed. Are you aware of quite how much like Pokemon that sounds? He picked up 'Xandria and rapidly punched ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Three

    Hey, finally getting here :) Nit-picks: The Brooks family sat at the dinner table. Judith, two years old, was playing enthusiastically with her food and singing quietly as she did ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Realistic Re: Chapter 5

    Hey Shan! Nit-picks: Jayson wasn't here as he was with their grandma, Patsy, shopping in town. Would he really be there anyway? Ronnie is the one who seems to be ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 3.2]

    Hey Sae, gonna try and grab this before it gets out of the Green Room! Nit-picks and nice moments: While her lack of knowledge on that particular subject was concerning, ...

    Aug 10, 2018


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