ExOmelas

Hi again, The younger detective’s statement brought the standing Winslow from his dreamy state. He carefully pulled his coat on while walking around to Norton’s side of the desk and ...

Alrighty, review number 2. “Then maybe you should get some more practice by hunting down some of those witnesses in the Johnson murder.” That's the main murder right? The first ...

*parks self here for review day* Here we go! The door to the station swung open before Winslow was able to put his hand on the knob and out walked ...

My team is so close to catching yours - we can do this! Winslow mildly thought of the kinds of places in Europe where something more would happen to someone ...

Alright, zero reviews on this when I start - will I manage to get a goddam green room review? The detective knew that he was in rough shape, but he ...

The same person keeps sniping my green room reviews xD And it surely was not Norton accidentally putting a knee in his chest - they had dealt with an incident ...

Okay now onto the actual green room reviews: “Reggie, you better not have fucking drugged me, again.” “Do you think so little of me to think that I would drug ...

Hey Jack, I figure one way to get to that unicorn would be to review this then review a whole bunch of your green room chapters ^.^ “Would our mutual ...

Hey Kanyon, I clicked on my reviews to see what stories I was in the middle of and saw this one. I know you haven't written it in a while, ...

Hey Oli, this came up as suggested on my front page, didn't actually realise you'd started posting. Rhys Hartman lit a cigarette, taking a few draws before sitting up. After ...

Hi Scribs! Welcome to this, my 750th review. This for the fifth blue star! Nit-picks: Margaretta waved to the centre of the room, where four cushioned chairs standing on glossy, ...

Hey, no nit-picks really. Most specific thing is a whole paragraph which there's not much point in quoting. That paragraph is the last one. It's kind of a jolt in ...

Hi again, still not midnight and I'm 3 reviews away from 5 blue stars... Why did there always have to be stupid fucking metaphors like this in the pathway to ...

Hiya, just waiting til midnight so I can start this week's LMS, thought I'd do some reviewing: He avoided a tasteless joke about sailors while adding the name to his ...

Hey, forgot I'd been doing reviews in between studying to stop myself burning out on studying. The older investigators, the ones that were closer to 30 and had previously been ...