Evolmega

Well, i find this very cute ^__^, and 'lesboic?' XD. And yeah.. It was really cute, but, try writing with no rhymes I'm not saying what you did was bad, ...

Well ~ like the others have said, More emotion on how you felt, rather then the situation, would of gave a pond inwhich the reader could try to grab up ...

Hey, I enjoyed reading this. The way you described it, made me enjoy it. And i always like a poem with a little rhyme here and there :wink: , haha, ...

WHOA :OOO!! I really enjoyed reading this one! The rhyming was very smooth, and it entertains one! It was funny, It reminded me of those 'shoe theifs' in that old ...

Well, I'm not a very big fan of haikus, but in your 'rush' I think this was very well thought out, lacks a bit of meaning though (In my view), ...