EvieSaxGirl

Thanks guys!! Very good to hear from people who're viewing it fresh if you know what I mean. Will mull over the suggestions for a while if that's ok! Love ...

Should be written into a song, but only if the song can do it justice...which isnt likely considering how good this is. Its a divine concoction of poem, thought and ...

Moonlight on the pond Fish breaks through the flat surface A fly is dinner trying to capure one moment in time....your thoughts would be welcome!

As others have said before me, this is very readable, and mostly flows effotlessly. The topic is a great idea, and you've chosen exactly the right words to express this. ...

Ahhh everything sounds so friendly and nice! I'm Evie, not really into story writing, but poems, (especially haikus) i love coming up with! haven't uploaded anything yet...but that will change. ...

This is a really relevent story, or part-story and has the potential to materialise into a fantastic piece of work. Keep up the good work my friend!! xx