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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Fina: Any proper Secondary's prized possession is their whistle; the thing Riftlings hate most in the world is noise. Also, weapons. Michael: I think they mean sentimental things, Fina. Like ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Tenses

    My opinion? That's okay, but only if it means something. Don't just decide, "Hey, this chapter I'm going to switch tenses!" Readers will notice and spend the rest of the ...

    Aug 8, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Science Fiction or Realistic?

    A realistic superhero story. Ten years later with no technological advancements isn't enough for sci-fi, but really, you should be less worried about the genre and more about actually writing/finishin

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: Does anyone else hate the Twilight series?

    Feel free to continue your Twilight discussion in this thread . ;) *locked*

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: Twilight

    Feel free to continue your discussion in this thread . ;) *locked*

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Book in a sentence

    Secondary (mine)-- A girl discovers a parallel universe where the other half of her soul is slowly dying, and she must find a way to save her in order to ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Punctuating Dialogue: a question?

    I say that the best way to learn how to write is to read a lot, and that goes for grammar too. But, if I see errors in punctuation, I ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    8/10. I like it. I like what it implies, and the internal issues it shows. But, really, if the character is lamenting the fact that they're an addict, does it ...

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Need assistance.

    In addition to what Rosey said (editing the text so it's deleted and changing the title) you can also lock your threads in the literary forums. Go to the bottom ...

    Jan 25, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Is the short story dead?

    The novel is exciting. :P It's the big adventure, the ultimate goal, to publish a best-selling novel. It's not sensible , no, to jump straight into crazy attempts at a ...

    Jan 14, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    Oh, it kills me to see people hating The Westing Game . D=

    Dec 26, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Bad YA Fiction?

    Try something written by John Green, Caroline B. Cooney, or Nancy Werlin.

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Short Stories

    Sometimes, you don't even necessarily need a full-fledged plot for a short stories-- just a theme. If you have a theme and interesting characters to work with, you can pull ...

    Dec 18, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    5/10 I like the idea, and the questions it stirs up, but the way it's phrased makes the characters' identities unclear. A first paragraph needs to be clear and not ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Where does my story go?

    Yup. ^^ When in doubt, go with Other Fiction.

    Dec 2, 2009


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