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  • Other Poetry Re: Is this not love?

    Hey Whispers! Love the username, by the way. And welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* You have no idea how much I love short poems, dear. :wink: It means I can ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Antigone's Critique Shop

    Link: Steps Ahead of Thunder Genre: Other fiction/Horror Summary: Well, it's supposed to be an entry for Cat and June's Horror contest. I'd rather not give you a summary, and ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Clo Needs You!

    Steps Ahead of Thunder Pretty pretty please, Clo? *adorable puppy dog eyes* I'll be forever in your debt. It's supposed to be horror, for Cat and June's Horror Contest. I'd ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Steps Ahead of Thunder

    Entry for Cat and June's Horror Contest. Not sure quite how horrific it is, though, so I'd appreciate any reactions, comments, and suggestions on how to make it even scarier ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Memories Fade

    Hello Stoney, I think I reviewed something of yours earlier? Anyway, I'm here to take a look at your lovely poem. ^_^ My mind drifts into hollow places Dark. secluded. ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Free Critiques!!!

    If you'd like more business, dear, I'd suggest having a shorter list that people have to put at the top of their post. Maybe just a title, link, and summary? ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!

    Done and done, Jon and Lost. I have way too much free time on my hands. ^_^

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: These Eyes of Mine

    These eyes of mine can see, Even the small insignificant. But who am I for me to be, Lord God since whence? Hmmm...quite confuzing, I must say. I think that ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: A collection of poetry

    Kirsten! It is not at all evil for you to request another review; that's what my thread is for. :wink: Feed not on thy soul; For thy soul follows not ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 3rd Official Pure Awesomeness Award

    :shock: Wow, thunder, thanks! After I realized that I had Rosey say 'awesomeness', I thought, "OMG, I have to put thunder_dude!" The dreaded PURPLES will take over the world, dearie. ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Vashoa's Life

    Vashoa stared out over the large space, empty, [nix this comma, dear] except for some shrubs and rivers she called home. She had lived on the prairies of South Dakota ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Reasons to Move (1)

    Clo! Thank you for using my thread, dear. ^_^ So, I love your opening sentence. Deaths are, as much as we might hesitate to admit, some of the best ways ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!

    Lost and Music are done, as well as one of Climber's three requests. Not sure if the other two need reviewing dear, but I'll check them out. And Clo, one ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dancer

    *Evi alert* *puts on reviewer cape and swooshes in dramatically to review the heck out of poem* :shock: Awww. Youu didn't warn me that the poor girl would die ! ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Mary, The Obedience Fairy - [Part One]

    Hey Poppity! I am so not here to review your story. Why would you think that? I simply refuse, and nothing you do could possibly change my mind. Uh-uh. No ...

    Mar 11, 2009


Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
— Robert Brault