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Hey armstronge! Evi here. Best of luck in the writing contest. :D His gray suit had became increasingly crumpled, Had become , first of all. Also, 'had become" suggests that ...

Hey Bugbug! I'm Evi. Nice to meet you! :D Please, take everything that I say with a grain of salt-- I am only being honest. So, I haven't read the ...

Check out this forum! It's called the Double-Trouble-Writing-Huddle and it's specifically for collaborations. :)

Hey Goldfish, welcome to YWS. ^_^ Carlos’ advice must always be taken with a grain of salt. Or at least a pound’s worth. But what he was saying had some ...

These are some really awesome tips and guidelines, Canis-- I just wish I had a finished novel to use them on! :P Thanks for the post.

Short stories. :) Gives me all the fun of characters, style/tone, descriptions, dialogue, and small bursts of plot without me having to follow a storyline through 65,000 words. My attention ...

This is so incredibly cool, Nate! I love how no one believes it until they test it out themselves. : P

I think I would probably die an agonizing death without the drop-down menus, honestly. They're pretty much the only way I navigate.

More revenue = happy YWSers! I don't mind the ads at all, and the grey is perfectly fine too, although it does seem less cheerful than the blue. But I'd ...

For my shorter short-stories (under 2,000 words, say, where I basically focus on one scene) there's really nothing to outline, so I just wing those. However, I just wrote a ...

Sargsauce really hit the nail on the head. I'm going to make some small comments, and then basically echo what he said. My legs were covered in holes from a ...

Hey Yuri! Evi here. So, I thoroughly enjoyed this. xD I, for one, love rhyming poems when they're done well, especially cute unpretentious ones like this. The more intelligent/sophisticated poets ...

Hey Fireful! Fahrvergnügen! At first I thought that this was the fourth chapter in a series of installments, but it seems to haven't posted anything else, so I'm going to ...

So, I'm not good at critiquing lyrics at all, and haven't in ages. It's really hard for me to be helpful without hearing the melody, and my computer won't let ...

Three in one day! This is monumental for me! xD