Evi

Agreed. Cliches in plots don't bother me as much, because we don't get to know the plot. We're relating to the characters, and as long as their view on the ...

Banned for having a signature too similar to my own. :P

Nope. They all die. TPBM has changed their YWS avatar at least three times since joining.

You know what would really make YWS go berserk? If freakforchrist even logged on. ;)

Becki! You can too write poetry! I thought this was quite nice, actually. Not sure if you wanted a full, in-depth review, but I'll just give you some genereal comments ...

Alright, love, Evi here! :D Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS! Glad to see that you've posted something. So, it's not that we love to complain about punctuation, ...

*bump* C'mon, people. You have to keep the Emporium in business during these trying economical difficulties. It is my duty to serve. ;)

*le gasp*

I know who I am, I'm just a nobody, but when your a someone and everyone else is taking stabs at who you are, well then I guess I come ...

Double-post. Oops. :oops: Ignore this, and continue down to the critique below. ~Evi

Burn

I'm afraid not. My imaginary friend's name is Jill. TPBM has reviewed something on YWS today.

Aww! So, nutmegan, this was a nice little story. You wrote it well, and there were no grotesque grammar issues. Although, I think you could do with reading this aloud ...

But...you...know...what's...even...more...fun? Dashes! Isn't-- this--so--terribly--exciting--?!?

OMG. Check out my profile. It's my favorite food. You're psychic. TPBM knows someone whose birthday is today.