Evi

Eek! Lily, so sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm here as requested now! ^^ But her body ached for sleep and her mind cried ...

April 21 Take my word for it, dear: it's not worth shooting for those stars when each sun in this galaxy shines for you just the way you are. Your ...

Hey, Ruthie! ^^ I'm Evi, and I'll take a look at this story today. :arrow: So, I, too, thought this was very well-written. And the plot looks good, although I ...

I was about to make a list of all the reasons this idea is disastrous and positively bonkers. Really, honestly, I was. O.o "Hey, Evi, look-- if you say the ...

O.o How did I get six poems behind? Brace yourselves, people. I'm armed with haikues and haiku-cheats (which were supposed to be haikus, but I just scrapped the syllable rule ...

*raises eyebrow* I thought everyone knew already? A good number of us go around with burlap sacks and crash through windows in the dead of night, kidnapping the little children ...

April 19 The lies coat my tongue like sickly sweet honey and the words I want to speak get trapped and warped inside. Honesty, they say, is the best policy, ...

^^ Here as requested, Pop! Let's take a look, shall we? :wink: :arrow: I'm going to have to go into nit-pick mode, because I think overall this was rather well ...

*throws confetti* You're all fantastic and totally deserving of your greenification.

Hey Mat! ^^ Here as requested. So sorry that your story has been neglected. :wink: :arrow: One of the first things I noticed is the choppiness of your sentence structure. ...

Hey, QueenB, congrats on your first posted piece! *throws confetti* I'm honored to review it for you. ^^ I see that you already are ahead of the ratio, so I ...

Like in you, and, so, on? Yes, all of those count as one syllable. English is incredibly confusing, so there's no concrete rule as to how to count syllables, but ...

*dies from cuteness-overload* :P

So. First of all, this needs to be rated R because of language. Any time you use the f-word, no matter the poem or story's subject and content, you have ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! ^^ Since you have such an excruciatingly long username, I hereby nickname you Perchy. Okay? 8) Good. Now that that's cleared up, I'm Evi, and I ...