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Hey Kyllorac! I've seen you around and seen you in Chat a couple of times, so I thought I'd drop in on your lonely little poem here, which I must ...

If you take one or two lines from a song and then put it in quotes ("__") it's okay, but smashing a lot of lyrics into a piece and then ...

Defying Gravity! ^^ There are so many people on this site who will share your interests. So, I'll be brief, since you've already recieved so many wonderful introductions. But do ...

015. Calamity -- At the End of the Day, Les Miserables This is one of five entries for Cal's Contest: Some Kind of Chorus. I'm somewhat happy with this, actually ...

Hey Conrad. ^^ I don't think I've ever critiqued your work, although I've certainly read enough pieces to know that you're a talented writer. I'll see what I can suggest ...

Lovely. You actually capitalized everything, wrote in complete sentences, didn't use chatspeak, and told us more about you than just that you came here to write gooder. I like you ...

Shy? YWSers? :lol: *dies laughing* As if that could ever exist. We're so bubbly and overenthusiastic, eventually you're going to think we're insane and you'll want to get as far ...

which I bump my thread. ^^ Despite the war, my deep loathing of playing Greeter has motivated me to continue critiquing throughout the week. Which means I need requests. It's ...

8) Hey Cassie. I love your name. *steals* My lifelong dream was to be named Cassie, but yeah. that didn't happen. xD Hope to see you around! Make sure to ...

Jack. xD June is epic. _> I said nothing. *loves June an insane amount*

Awesome! Russia, eh? YWS is so diverse when it comes to culture, you'll be sure to meet people from all over the world. I, myself, am from Arkansas, which is ...

Omg! Elly! *hugs* Mimimac is your cousin?!? That's so awesome. ^^ I'll go ahead and elaborate a bit more about the site, just in case she hasn't [s]warned you about ...

Hey Jared! I don't think I've ever critiqued anything of yours, although I do know I've read a couple pieces. I'll try my best at this particular (and very short?) ...

Alright. So. You asked me for a critique ages ago on this, and it's taken me forever to get to it! *flails* So sorry. But it looks like you've already ...

Hey, Lynn! Wow. You know what? I thought this was an incredibly enjoyable read. Of course, even the best poetry can be improved. But still! I was extremely impressed. :wink: ...