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Re: Although My Life is Passing by
Hey Jessa! A cute (that's probably the wrong word, but you get my drift) rhyming poem! :) You have good rhythm and your rhyme scheme is consistent. I don't have ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: callouses
Oh, you're good. :D I enjoyed this. I don't think I've reviewed your poetry much? I've kind of been avoiding it, but recently I've decided to venture back in a ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: When the Sun Goes Walking
I grumble to Kamas about her excess of space poetry, and then I write this. When the sun goes walking, she sprinkles yellow roses and breadcrumbs on the sidewalk so ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)
Rina, you fail.
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Mike
Hey Ellie! Sorry for the delay. I have to warn you (and I think I've said this before) that I really don't like letter-style stories, so I'm already biased, but ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Everyone's looking spiffy, as always. ;) Are your eyes two different colors, Isha? O=
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: New Junior Moderators?
I'm actually quite upset that any of you believed I could ever be hated so ferociously, even by Gal. ;P In all seriousness, though, something like that would never happen ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Sleeping Blizzard
Hey Kafka. :D Evi here. My poetry interpretation skills are a immensely rusty, but here goes! The first, very concrete thing I can say, is to avoid the "like" simile ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: The March 2011 Review Day Review (now with graphs!)
I didn't get to any this time, but that just makes me determined to do a ton next review day! Congrats on an awesome achievement, everyone!
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: An Open Letter to Nate
Actually, Snoink, I appreciate the support, but I think we should give Gal a chance to explain himself. I'm going to unlock this for now-- I'd like to hear what ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
YWS can be kind of confusing at times, but don't be discouraged! We're a really great community for sharing work and improving your craft. I really hope you like it ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: hi!!!!!
Hey ArtyChoke, glad you found YWS! :D And very clever name you have there, haha. One rule that we'll ask you to follow is proper grammar-- that means we capitalize ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Like System for the Forums Improved
Fabuloso! Do we get notified if someone likes a comment of ours? (If someone likes this comment I can report back with the answer. ;) )
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Completely Lost? Come here!
TeenWriter-- I sent you a PM about it. ;)
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)
Psh, guys, don't lose hope yet! :D And even if we don't make this, there will be plenty of other literary journals and magazines and contests for us to submit ...
Mar 20, 2011
