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Evi

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Although My Life is Passing by

    Hey Jessa! A cute (that's probably the wrong word, but you get my drift) rhyming poem! :) You have good rhythm and your rhyme scheme is consistent. I don't have ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: callouses

    Oh, you're good. :D I enjoyed this. I don't think I've reviewed your poetry much? I've kind of been avoiding it, but recently I've decided to venture back in a ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: When the Sun Goes Walking

    I grumble to Kamas about her excess of space poetry, and then I write this. When the sun goes walking, she sprinkles yellow roses and breadcrumbs on the sidewalk so ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)

    Rina, you fail.

    Apr 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mike

    Hey Ellie! Sorry for the delay. I have to warn you (and I think I've said this before) that I really don't like letter-style stories, so I'm already biased, but ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]

    Everyone's looking spiffy, as always. ;) Are your eyes two different colors, Isha? O=

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: New Junior Moderators?

    I'm actually quite upset that any of you believed I could ever be hated so ferociously, even by Gal. ;P In all seriousness, though, something like that would never happen ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sleeping Blizzard

    Hey Kafka. :D Evi here. My poetry interpretation skills are a immensely rusty, but here goes! The first, very concrete thing I can say, is to avoid the "like" simile ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The March 2011 Review Day Review (now with graphs!)

    I didn't get to any this time, but that just makes me determined to do a ton next review day! Congrats on an awesome achievement, everyone!

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: An Open Letter to Nate

    Actually, Snoink, I appreciate the support, but I think we should give Gal a chance to explain himself. I'm going to unlock this for now-- I'd like to hear what ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi!

    YWS can be kind of confusing at times, but don't be discouraged! We're a really great community for sharing work and improving your craft. I really hope you like it ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: hi!!!!!

    Hey ArtyChoke, glad you found YWS! :D And very clever name you have there, haha. One rule that we'll ask you to follow is proper grammar-- that means we capitalize ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Like System for the Forums Improved

    Fabuloso! Do we get notified if someone likes a comment of ours? (If someone likes this comment I can report back with the answer. ;) )

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Completely Lost? Come here!

    TeenWriter-- I sent you a PM about it. ;)

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Submit to the Young Writers Literary Journal! (closed)

    Psh, guys, don't lose hope yet! :D And even if we don't make this, there will be plenty of other literary journals and magazines and contests for us to submit ...

    Mar 20, 2011


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