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Hey Archer! ^^ So, first of all, I think this has a lot of potential. There aren't very many real problems , actually, but sometimes your style becomes stitled-- a ...

As far as I know, that's not possible-- someone more knowledgeable might tell you otherwise, though. But, really, the simplest answer is to review some things quickly. :P They don't ...

6/10 I like it, but the strange name makes my tongue trip on the very first sentence, which kind of bothers me. Perhaps hit us with the pronunciation roadblock after ...

Here as requested, Anzius. ^^ Let's see what we have here. The commander walked with confident steps to a squat young man. The young adult had evidently got the short ...

Last summer my grandmother, who is a seasoned traveler (to say the least), took my parents and me to London and Edinburgh. It was amazing, despite the ten hour plane ...

Hi Rae, I'm Evi. ^^ She was nice [comma] but I only ever saw her when I was sick [comma] which wasn't often. You're missing some commas here, which would ...

Hey, AliceRose! ^^ Evi here. First of all, you should really know that you've spelled your title wrong. >_> I understand, typos happen to everyone...but, please, proofread next time? It ...

Hey Whyte, welcome to YWS! ^^ Quick note-- one of the site's main rules is that you have to post at least two reviews on someone else's writing for every ...

Congrats, June. :P

Yay, Jon! Enjoy it! ^^

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I haven't yet read City of Glass, and it's been a while since I finished the first two, but I really thought they were good books. I'm extremely religious, and ...

Elsewhere , by Gabrielle Zevin. I thought the concept was really interesting (once you die, you go to this sort of limbo-afterlife and steadily grow younger until you're reborn on ...

Showing -vs- Telling: An Article in the Knowledge Base Take a look at that first of all, and also at Colleen's example. One thing to keep in mine, however, is ...