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Julia-- "Sure. I mean, why not? A door's a door. As long as I can get in and out through it." Piper-- "No. They bring back painful memories. And no, ...

KWS? O.o

Excitement in your smile—what have we tonight? Another balloon, perhaps a song; and yes, darling, you’re doing it right. Just let the tune play ‘til the tears are all gone. ...

Hey Gal. Bear with me here. flagships upon a dressing gown, fragments of linen upon a girl around a dressing gown. a line of combat boots and salute(s) to the ...

xD Cake works, I guess. But I think Snoink was referring more to making him vulnerable by being attatched to something-- whether it be a person, and animal, or an ...

Hey Eddykins! ^_^ Sorry for this review taking so long. I'm very surprised you haven't received any critiques yet-- I thought this was actually very good. In fact, there's not ...

Hey Bickazer! Can I call you Azzy? I quite like that...*muses* I hope so too, thought Luanna, stepping into the archway. She paused before entering, casting the porter one last ...

Hey Bickazer. ^^ Since you do have so many fabulous suggestions here, I won't go quite as in-depth, just some general comments. I'll do a more thorough review on part ...

Hey Tuna! Since you already have a lot of opinions and I'm running short on time with a lot more reviews to finish, I'm just going to go over some ...

Hey Avery. ^^ Here as requested. You already have a lot of crits, so I'll just make some quick points. :arrow: Your main thing here, as everyone's been suggesting, is ...

Have a great birthday! ^_~

Hey Cookies! ^^ Here as requested. :arrow: Grammar You are missing a heck of a lot of commas, love, and you have an abundance of fragments here. I'm going to ...

Samson tapped his foot nervously, looking over his shoulder a couple times per minute. I marveled at how ridiculous he was being. "Nothing's going to go wrong, Sam," Julia said ...

Huh. xD I really *do* avoid Lyrics like the plague, don't I?

Hola. ^^ I read the first installment, but you already have an abundance of input on that one, so I thought I'd review both of them here. I really am ...