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Hey Galerius. As a quick disclaimer-- I've been looking over some of my past reviews, and I made so many typos, it's not even funny. Please ignore any and all ...

Hey Tigger! ^_^ Sorry for any delay. So, I'll start off with some overall comments. I thought the narrative was a bit stilted. Thsi is partly due to the present ...

Here as requested, again! (From a long time ago, but whatever. ^_^ I keep up with my promises! xD) But, seriously, this is too long to post as one segment. ...

Alright, everyone, sorry for any wait. ^_^ Everything in line is now completed.

Hey Shina! ^_^ Congrats on your purplification. A stream of crimson surged down the coward's face, forming a pool of the substance below his chin. Here, you've avoided using the ...

Jaime-- "Shoot it." Julia-- "Climb up the tree after it." Michael-- "Let it go. I'm not about to waste my time going after some animal, and, after all, it's just ...

Let Me Leave with Spectrum Shades ^_^ CBF, darling.

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O.o Mr. Oxiclean, nooo! It seems like 50 years old is the unlucky number recently. :?

Hey Vivi. ^_^ Here as requested. Honestly, I'm not sure if I really enjoyed this. I found it rather rushed, jumping from idea to idea without pausing long enough to ...

Hey Shina. ^^ Sorry for the wait, but it seems you already have some great advice. :arrow: The transition between the first and second paragraph is rather abrupt, I think. ...

Hey Jamie! ^_^ So sorry that it's taken me this long to review this story, but I'm finally here! Since it's so lengthy, though, I'm not going to read through ...

Hey Huggybear. ^_^ I'm running short on time, so I'm just going to make some quick points. Life keeps going on and on Sunrise, Sunset Like the way you kicked ...

Julia-- "I choose to politely decline all poisonous substances, thank you very much. I'm a bit too busy at the moment to spontaneously die." Michael-- "Actually, Jules, I think it's ...

Julia-- "Of course. Saving the world means getting a lot done in little time." Jaime-- "You flatter yourself, Julia. The world could manage without you. And yes, I think I ...