Evi

Hey Dakota! IF you remember, a long time ago you requested a critique on your Wyndolyn peice from me. I've recently checked, and you've already recieved a good number of ...

Hey Lil_Pau! ^^ Here as requested. I know I'm late, but I've been super busy, and I'm sorry. >_> But we can always use advice, so hey! Here we go. ...

:P But you said Paris Tipton, Lily.

Hey pinkangel! I wrote out a whole review for this, and then my computer totally ate it, so you’ll have to bear with me. >_> Let me just give you ...

I think 20:00, Kat. But don't trust me. >_> And yay! =D I probably can't call in (unless I manage to divert my parents' attention) but I'll certainly listen!

Hey Ashley! ^_^ Evi here. :arrow: Flow & Punctuation So, I did enjoy this. But I'll get to that later. Right now I just want to mention some of your ...

Ha! I pwn all of you. :P Hi! I thought this looked very interesting, so it's going to be my first critique on the entire site! You should be vey ...

That looks really cool! ^_^ However, you might want to edit your link-- you forgot the 'y' in 'already'. The link you're looking for, I think, is:

Julia-- "Dead, if I'm lucky." Michael-- "God, Jules, you keep saying that and people are going to think you're psychotic. I personally hope to be a doctor. Saving people's lives ...

Hey Krupp: To be honest with you, I felt this poem was very lacking. The concept is interesting, and you had some very nice similes in there, but I think ...

Hey Wolf! ^_^ Here as requested. So, first of all, I really like the way you start this out, with the 'What do you fear the most?' bit. It's a ...

Congrats! :D You deserve it.

Hey Spike. ^_^ This 'Will Review for Food' section is where different people offer their critiquing services, so that they each have their own little business thread. If you would ...

Yay, Zoe! =D I'm so excited you've joined. Everyone's really nice, I promise, and you'll make tons of friends (who love to read and write!) and your writing will really ...

Hey Ica! :twisted: Oh, yes. With YWS around, you won't find any excuses. Write! Write! So, welcome to the site! ^_^ I'm Evi, and I'm an Instructor, so if you ...