Evi

Dearest Evi, You just had to kill me off in the first chapter, huh? Well, great. I don't need to live anyway. Thanks for nothing. You suck, Jules

Hey Durriedog. ^^ Evi here. First of all. The 2:1 ratio, which Empress almost brought up, is the major rule of YWS. That means that, for every one piece you ...

Hey Jojo, I liked this. ^^ I think it might move a bit slowly for a prologue, maybe just a teensy bit over-described, but that's not really fixable at this ...

Mm, I like Demitri and Kellan, maybe Adam. Sebastian is sort of over-used, I think, although it's supposed to be rare, and Bastian sounds too much like an unkind name. ...

*steals Sureal's problem* Oh, you poor thing. :P

Hey Poem! ^_^ Sorry for the wait-- school is taking way more time than I had expected. -_- Homework = slow death. I'm just going to go over some key ...

Mm, I'm always worried about pace. I get so caught up in a storyline developing, or characters staying true to themselves and being original, that I'm not sure whether I'm ...

Lol, I just want to know who voted happy. xD Of course I'd be very disappointed.

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Hey Abigail, Evi here. ^^ Night owl's right-- it's a cool idea that would have a lot of morals and emotion behind it, it you delve a bit deeper into ...

Julia: "Why would I paint a picture at a time like this, I'm trying to save all of humankind, for goodness' sakes--" Michael: "Flowers are nice. I'm rather partial to ...

Hey Shina, no worries about inactivity. ^^ I haven't been on much because of insane loads of homework, and everyone starting school understands. Now, I actually didn't like this poem. ...

I'm having the same problem as irishfire, where I have a somewhat-lengthy PM (a reply to someone else who PMed me successfully) and nothing's happening with any of the buttons ...

Done, no line! ^_^

Hey Rose, here as requested. ^_^ "I am. As Is Helena." said I. "We're twins." 'Is' shouldn't be capitalized. Tonight, the supper party escalated from its usual three - Father, ...