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...I'd say that went pretty well. ;)

Hey! I enjoyed this. It's short and simple. I like your rhyme scheme, but you could tighten up the rhythm. Instead of just relying on rhyme at the end, count ...

Hey Cal! That first paragraph is quite large. =O Maybe you should start a new one after "White Hart" since the thought changes a little. It's just a little intimidating ...

Can you draw a pink version of the Pokemon Eevee ? :D

Hey Cal. ;) Sorry for the delay! Alan Garrett had spent a week since Friday last at the home of one Sir Morton Ainsley, Major in the 52nd Regiment of ...

In what sick, twisted perspective is that not wrong?

I think Jagged's pic pretty much sums it all up.

Hey Lena. ^_^ I’m only seventeen, you see. One thing I noticed early on is that your narrator's (Tony?) tone is very colloquial and informal, with a lot of "kind ...

Fina: Any proper Secondary's prized possession is their whistle; the thing Riftlings hate most in the world is noise. Also, weapons. Michael: I think they mean sentimental things, Fina. Like ...

Hey Daisuki. ^_^ Evi here. First thing I noticed: Esther Slyvester gave you a really good review on the first part. I agree with a point she made, which I'll ...

BRING IT.

Verdana, 12 pt, 1.5 spacing, justified alignment. >_> I'm pretty OCD about it actually.

Hey Knightley. I've got to say, I'm a fan of your writing. Just dropping in for a quick crit. She would cuff me gently I thought the word choice of ...

Y'know, different lit forum ideas pop up all the time-- we've had suggestions for horror and mystery forums, and humor might've been brought up before too. I think the reason ...

Hey tele. ;) First of all, it's hard to review this because it's one giant paragraph. That's some serious formatting hindrance for your readers-- the block of text is intimidating, ...