Evi

I'm sorry, really, but Greeting is the bane of my existence. xD I went crazy for one war, and that was a life-time's worth of welcoming for me. :P But ...

Knightly Angel! ^^ Haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while, though I have read a lot of your poetry and come to the conclusion that I really love it. ...

Hey Elinor. ^^ Hmm, yes, I agree with Rosey. You seem to have written this opening chapter just to get the plot and characters out there. There's nothing really wrong ...

Hey Burgs, Evi here. ^^ Love the avatar, by the way. :P April stood at the edge of the bath. As far as first sentences go, this one doesn't offer ...

Hey Lilz, Evi here for an emergency attack. ^_^ Won't be long, really, just a couple of points. Every morning, the same terrible feeling of nausea had swept over her ...

Hola Pozoe! ^^ “Are you ready? Rachel and Kess are probably hiring private detectives already to come and find us. We should really find them before they blow too much ...

Hola Pozoe! ^^ Evi here. At the moment, I'm writing a critique on both sections at the same time, so that's to blame for the inevitable confusion that is to ...

Silversun-- Go to 'My YWS' and then click on the 'Friends' tab. From there you can type in the usernames of people you'd like to add! ^_^ You just have ...

Mm, dogs. ^^ I love my puppy (although not so much a puppy anymore) and I've had her sicne I was five. Having a dog (a big one, especially) makes ...

Yo-la, Evi here. ^^ Jetpack pretty much had the exact right idea about what needs to be fixed, so I'll just echo some things, nit-pick a bit, and make some ...

Hello, my name is Aaron, and this is the part where I kill you. ^_^

For Thorn, since it's so obviously from nature originally and not used solely for a certain book, you should be fine to use it. ^^ However, with Murtagh, people can't ...

I can't imagine what that would mean for NASA now, if it turns out to be true that the whole thing was faked. Although I'm not sure how they would ...

Hehe, Pen. xD My new mantra: Eat. Sleep. YWS. It's disturbingly accurate. O_o

Hmm... Did you know that, when you go to the 'Community' drop-down menu and select 'General Discussions', the Lounge's sub-forums (Contests and Homework Help) and Randomness's sub-forum (Word Play) do