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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Dangerous Dream

    Hey Zoe. ^_^ So, this was rather short, ya? I think a bit too short for us to get a real idea of what the story's like, or how well ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Closing the Chatroom?

    Or maybe go back to having Moderators open it? Because the ones that I always see in Chat are generally not Mods. I agree with this, though-- there can be ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Hypnotic Bed Post (Enjoy!)

    Hey Jon! So this is short and sweet, requires very little nitpicking. I felt a little underwhelmed with this, honestly. I think the subject matter-- dreams, nightmares, sleep --is so ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    Mm, I actually like that a lot. It offers both conflict (why is this girl on television?) and some character insight (Marty not being able to take his eyes off ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Sorry to post here again, but the front page 'Staff picks' went a little funky for me. All of the pictures are layered on top of one another, so you ...

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nothing can be compared to you

    Hey Pudin! ^^ Here as requested, forgive me for any delays. Nothing can be compared to you. Nothing in the masterpiece of this world can be compared to you. I ...

    Sep 24, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!

    *poof!*

    Sep 24, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)

    Hey Skittles, here as requested. ^^ The other reviewers' points are valid, so fix those grammar issues and such. I may repeat something, because I didn't read all of them. ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Under the 'Read/Write' drop down menu, the fourth tab is white and blank until you run your mouse over it, and only then can you see the 'Recent Additions' label ...

    Sep 20, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Julia: "Books? Why would I read books?" Michael: "Generally I enjoy historical fiction and thrillers, sometimes horror if it's done tastefully. Never fantasy though. It's...too similar to my reality,

    Sep 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Everything to Lose

    Hey Sammim! (I'm calling you that because the site already has two Sams :P) I'm Evi. The Mississippi sun was beating down upon the world at the moment my life ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    Brassnbridle-- Check under 'My YWS', at the 'Overview' section. There should be a tab on the left that says 'Manage drafts'. Click on this tab and see if you can ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fire-Safe: A Novel; ch.1 (PG-13)

    Hey Sphinx, welcome to YWS. ^^ Congrats on your first posted piece! I'm Evi, here to review. :arrow: So, to start off with, I do quite like the first sentence. ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: The Completely Evil Plan

    Your welcome, darling. ^_^ We love you, too. Tough times are inevitable, every once in a while, but you're amazing enough to have overcome a trial like that, and you ...

    Sep 17, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Strong Bad's take on poetry!

    O_o

    Sep 16, 2009


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott