Evi

Hello, my name is Julia, and The Angel of Death just sold my soul to the devil.

You say Kronk, I think car engine. (No, don't ask. xD)

Hey Logan! This will be shorter. First of all, this is a heck of a lot better. You, my friend, are pretty good at revisions and taking advice to heart. ...

Out of all these comments, the only thing I've really had much trouble with is Rosey's last point. I did like being able to scroll down during reviews to read ...

'Intelligent' is relative, I think. I agree that there must be some form of life out there, somewhere, and I even think there's probably intelligent life somewhere as well, but ...

Out of all these comments, the only thing I've really had much trouble with is Rosey's last point. I did like being able to scroll down during reviews to read ...

Hey Logan! ^^ Thanks for using my thread. :arrow: The very first issue that jumped out to me is rhythm. A lot of people think that rhythm is only applied ...

xD Hey Hope! Evi here. This was extremely well-written. It was a short flash fiction kind of thing, so this isn't going to be a long review; I don't think ...

Hey! ^^ Evi here. So, this needs a lot of work. You have a nice little love story idea going on, with tons of possibilities, but before you let your ...

Party in the USA. xD I'm sorry.

Hey! Evi here. ^^ So, I have mixed feelings on this. I actually think you wrote this very well-- your sentence structure, description, characterization, the lot. I enjoyed reading the ...

'Grats Shina. ^^

Hey! So, the previous reviewers made some good points about phrases that stick out or need to be reworded. I'll point out a couple more. It was a familiar one, ...

I'm emerald_Evi. Evi was taken. Quite the tragedy.

Grammar are kewl, ppl.