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I'm somewhat terrified to download anything new to my laptop. With my technological aptitude, chances are I'll click the wrong button and the entire thing will spontaneously combust on me. ...

^_^ Hey EbonyRose, welcome to YWS! To be honest, I only clicked on your welcome thread because I like the word 'ebony' for some reason. It just rolls off of ...

Eek, Poem, I'm so sorry for the delay! Here, finally, as requested. First of all: Punctuation Within Dialogue Tutorial . Check this out. Your punctuation and capitalization are off during ...

Happy Thanksgiving, everyone. ^_^ My father is sick, so, in hopes not to spread the illness among our family, and especially to a friend's mother (who is 88 years old) ...

If you go to Groups (or My Groups) there's a gray box in the bottom right-ish, under the user's avatar, their little user box, and the ads. The box says ...

Hey Logan! Sorry for the epic lateness of this review. So! Short segment, short review. I think the biggest thing you need to work on is your dialogue, and the ...

Hey! ^^ Sorry it took this long for you to get a review; I think it's because this is rather long to post in one segment. If it happens again, ...

Hey Raphael! So, wow. *whistles* I think I'll have to echo the previous reviewer, whose name I'm not going to try and spell. This was quite impressive! Biggest issue was ...

D: I just accidentally clicked the backspace button on this stupid review, so I lost it all, and since I don't have time to retype it all out, let me ...

I was going to say "In the name of love!", but "Hammertime" works too.

Hey Young Gun! So, honestly, I'm not really sure what you're aiming for with this little series-type things. I read the first installment as well, and I've got to say ...

Hey Poem! ^^ Sorry for any wait, and thanks for using my thread. * First of all, I don't think it does you any good to call that first line ...

Okay! Don't have much time. Sorry for the wait, but you've already got a lot of reviews on this, so this doesn't need to be long. He had been verbally ...

I said Mary-Sue. I don't think I could survive reading about an MC who is completely heartless, evil, and rude. To read a book I have to at least like ...

Hooray! Thank you, Nate, for the creation of YWS. ;) Now, where's the cake?