Evi

I'll be sweet and to the point-- thank you, YWS. You've done wonders for my writing, and even my self-esteem. I've met so many amazing people on this site that ...

Congrats, Kammie. ;)

Hey Amy! Conrad is completely right. The glaring issue here is that transition-- right about here, I think: “Oh, wake up.” Kaitlyn, losing patience, walked back out, leaving the sunlight ...

xD Best of luck to everyone. I'd love to participate, but I have exams coming up in two weeks. I'm sure you can all do it!

Hey Gal. I'd babble on a bit about how great this was, but something tells me you're not the kind of writer who posts their writing to fish for compliments. ...

And of course, to prevent any more discussion about Tiger Woods, we start a thread entirely devoted to him. ;) It's kind of like saying, "Don't think about green elephants!" ...

Yup. ^^ When in doubt, go with Other Fiction.

I'm a Catholic, I believe in God, and thinking that there is something bigger than myself keeps me happy. ^_^ But if someone else doesn't think so, and they're happy ...

Looks awesome, Nate. Thanks!

Hey Pen! Here as requested. ^_^ Thanks for using my thread. So, first of all, is this meant not to be broken up into any stanzas? I think your ideas ...

Hey SingingSaturdays, welcome to YWS! Evi here. Right now, this poem isn't much more than a list of what your narrator does, and, sorry, that's just not interesting enough to ...

Sea (I've seen too many of Conrad's An Iron Sea installments floating around the forums. =P)

Hey Conrad. ;) I would've given this crit to your story, but you didn't post it on YWS (fail, by the way) and so you'll have to settle for my ...

=P Funny, I don't seem to remember that conversation involving so many 'XD's. In fact, I distinctly recall that we were talking about Manny's Thanksgiving, involving a 6000 year old ...

At this rate of demand, Nate, I'd suggest purchasing a small tropical island to bulldoze. Then put up an electric fence to keep out the environmentalists. Ooh, and we should ...